Query Package Review
What you’ll get:
Your query letter marked up with comments focusing on making your pitch snappy, clear and appealing to agents.
Your synopsis marked up, focusing on clarity, pace and comprehension.
Your first ten-thousand words proofread to make sure typos and errors don’t distract from your work.
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What is a query-package review?
If you are about to begin submitting to agents – or are already in the process but aren’t yet getting any bites – and want to make sure your submission package is as clean as possible, this package will help you polish your query letter, synopsis and opening chapters.
I will mark-up both your letter and synopsis with feedback, and proofread your first ten-thousand words, correcting typos and errors, focusing on spelling, grammar and punctuation as well as formatting issues.
I have managed the submissions inbox at both a publishing house and a literary agency, and can help make your query immediately appealing so that you sell your novel in the best way possible. Submissions inboxes are deluged with queries, so it’s important to ensure nothing lets your pitch down or distracts from your story.
If you want structural help with your manuscript before you begin submitting, a developmental edit or manuscript assessment may be the right next step. Or if you are ready to book in for a query-package review or have questions, you can contact me here.